I came to the blog with the determination to write something and then I checked my last post. Guess what, it was on 20th of August, exactly a month ago. In that very post, I had mentioned about writing more frequently which I failed to do. A lot of reasons but let’s not get into that.
I am sharing something I recently wrote, it is in Hindi and is in raw form (not edited). So go ahead, read it and let me know what you think. (Source for photo)
Aadha piya hua chai ka woh cup, mez par rakha tha, chai toh behraal thandi ho chuki thi lekin uska abhi tak koi pata nahi tha. Neeche se achanak kisine awaz lagai thi toh woh daudta hua chala gaya tha. Mujhe lagaa koi khaas azeez aaya hoga aur yahi sochte sochte mujhe kaafi waqt ho gaya lekin koi nahi aaya. Mann mai khayal sa aaya ki uth kar chala jaata hun lekin fhir yaad aaya ki ghar khali tha aur is tarah ghar khula chod jaana theek nahi hoga toh main wapis baith gaya.
Mann behlane ke liye kuch toh karna tha toh waha padhe akhbar ko lekar maine saalo baad khabre padhna shru kiya aur keval istehaar dekh kar woh bhi mez par patak diya. Akhbar se adhi chai ka cup gir gaya aur poori mez par chai fhail gayi. Maine socha lo, yahi baaki tha and yahi soch kar main safai main lag gaya. Itni hi der main ek mohtarma zeene se upar aagayi aur boli Chacha jaan ghar hai kya, maine bola nahi woh nahi hai aap batae kya kaam. Woh thodi der ruki aur fhir boli, aap hai kaun, pehle toh yaha nahi dekha. Chacha jaan ne yeh ghar bech toh nahi diya?
Jispar maine jaldi se kaha arre nahi chacha jaan gaye hue hai bahar main unke bete ka dost hun. Paan chabati hui woh mud kar wapis zeene se utar gayi. Utarte utarte boli ki unse kehdena ki Sakeena ayi thi. Maine zehen main dobara naam dohraha jisse ki main bhool na jaun.Mujhe baithe hue kuch adha ghanta hua hoga aur ab mere intezaar ki intehaan aage badh chuki thi. Mujhe apne dost par behisaab gussa aa raha tha par main yeh bhi soch raha tha ki kuch galat na hua ho. Thodi der main andar ek kamre main rakhe telephone ki ghanti baji toh main uthane ke lye gaya. Phone uthaya toh……..
Nice writing style, day to day happenings described simply but yet greatly
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I am glad you liked it. Thanks 🙂
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Kya baat hai. Nice written
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Shukriya Janab
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Is it to be continued? Phone uthaya toh kya hua? And dost kb vaps aaya 😀 or jb aaya toh aapko kitna gussa aaya ?
You left so many questions answered :p.
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Aage ki kahani jaldi hi likhi jaegi 🙂
Thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment!
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A very well-written and greatly expressed story. Enjoyed reading it!
-Kavita
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Thanks for this comment and I am happy to know that you liked it 🙂
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Very nice story
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Glad you liked! Thanks 🙂
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Rahman ji plz also go through my post, hope u like
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Sure, I will!
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Omg.. This is just amazing…something that I’ve read so beautiful.. . You’ve literally made me blank and there are so many questions in my head….
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Questions will be answered soon. And thanks a lot 🙂
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This post is just so amazing.. So beautifully written.. You’ve left me blank and there are so many questions in my head.
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Thanks much for this comment 🙂
I am yet to complete this!
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I just loved the way you wrote it.
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I am glad you did!
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खयालों के समंदर में गोते लगाना
ढूंढकर फिर यादों की मोती निकालना
और उन लम्हों को ज़हन में दोहराना ….
कभी-कभी अच्छा लगता है !
– अनूप राय
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Behtreen!
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Shukriya bhai!
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क्या खूब लिखा है आपने
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Bahut bahut shukriya!
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Buhat Khobsurat likhi hui tehreer ❤ Will wait for the 'to be continued' part 🙂
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Jaldi hi zaroor 🙂
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bohat acha..wonderfully written..besides, I too would like to share a fun blog on Indian Couples whereby I have used the famous Hindi Dialogues/taunts (teekhe teer 😛 ) that are exchanged between couples in every Indian Household .. 🙂
Spiciest Biryani called Marriage -Kahani Ghar Ghar Ki !
https://the-passport-souls.travel.blog/2017/12/30/spiciest-biryani-called-marriage-kahani-ghar-ghar-ki/
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Zaroor padhunga mai yeh! Shukriya!
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thank you so much!
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Please visit my blog
http://mehkasha.com
Let me know if you like it
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