The way you walked away
Without looking back
Without a word
And disappeared
Around the curve
I don’t remember
For how long I stood there
With so many emotions
Yet with a blank look
On my face
I wanted to scream
In the dark and silent night
Where no one would hear me
Yet I stood silent
Listening to the trees sway
I walked away from you
As far as I could
Hoping to avoid
Even the thoughts of you
Ignoring the fact that
You were in my veins
Little did I know
And little did you know
We were never meant to be
Apart.
Now one might wonder that I have an amazing (romantic) life but let me assure you that is not the case.ย I usually write poems out of my imagination and this one was no different. However the inspiration for this one was unusual. ย While coming back to home, I saw that the usual yellow street lamps were replaced with white led lamps. Combine them with a little fog and you have an amazing scene that could very wellย umm.. well yeah figure that out for yourself. ๐
“Ignoring the fact that you were in my veins”. My favourite lines, and this is my favourite poem of yours so far. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. โค
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I am glad that this made it to the list. It is usually you who write brilliant poetry. I am honored.
Thank You. ๐
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I love your poems, you never believe me. This is seriously beautiful. I was sitting on my chair shouting this is beautiful, hahaha. ๐
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I do believe you. ๐
That must have been one hell of a reaction. ๐
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Well, I was shouting inside my mind. xD
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Haha ๐
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Pretty lines. You have brilliant imagination ๐
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Glad you like them and thank you. ๐
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You’re welcome โบ๏ธ
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Beautiful poetry..
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Thanks, Sagar.
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I certainly love it – and your explanation just adds to the story. Excellent.
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Glad you do, Sumyanna.
I thought adding that explanation would add a personal touch.
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Wow! Your imagination is better than reality !
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Yes looks like it. ๐
I am glad you liked it, Ruma ๐
Thank you!
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Jafar, it is OUTSTANDING! Beautifully expressed. I liked it very much. ๐
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I am glad you liked it, Mariam ๐
Thank you ๐
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Oh, wow.
Beautiful poem, Rehman ๐
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I am glad you like it Hiba.
Actually happy to know you like it. ๐
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Pleasure’s all mine ๐
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