a deer in forest
a sparrow flies away
leaf falls from tree
Okay,here is my first try at Haiku,I just love reading them.Tell me if I am doing it right and I’d surely love to read some by you. 🙂
Forest Haiku
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its deep and beautiful, so far i myself have written 2 haiku’s and the standard principal of writing a haiku is that you must have 5, 7 and 5 syllables or letters in each line, here are my haikus 🙂
https://akhizmunawar.wordpress.com/2014/08/05/haiku-1/
https://akhizmunawar.wordpress.com/2014/10/31/haiku-2/
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I really liked you first one,pretty deep and beautiful.Thanks for sharing 🙂
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