I was by the riverside
You were there too
I stood there
thinking of coming to you
I was besides the stairs
Saw you sitting there too
But I still
Didn’t come to you
I waited for you
By the cafe
But you didn’t come that day
Maybe because
That was the day
I was gonna come to you.
Just some nonsensical poetry.I’ve been a little ill,actually sinus infection and it sucks totally!
Also a reply to Daily Prompt now.
At least you try. I’m not ill, but I haven’t written poetry for quite a long time now.
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You should give it a try,makes things around you better.
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The thing is, I tend to be more inspired in writing poems when I am depressed and especially mad, he he
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Well,that’s how I got better.Words flow out when you are sad,mad and depressed.
Why not make use of it? 😉
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Mainly because I try to be more positive and not dwell on the negative. NOT saying writing like that is bad, considering it’s therapeutic. Just saying that’s what I personally try to avoid for I am someone who overthinks and over-analyzes things.
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I meant you start from there,it gives you a way and slowly you start taking it positively,you start observing beautiful things.Like nature,the tree,lake,birds and so on.
I used to overthink and still do that from time to time because no matter what doing that ruins everything for me,it’s both blessing and a curse to feel and see things so deeply.
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I get that. It’s just the current cause of these angry/depressed thoughts put into poetic words are still there even when I’m done writing. I just want to come up with more poems that are more positive or reflective, at least, not mad, that I may still come up with from time to time but hopefully not if I can help it.
But because we are on to this, I promise to post one or two of these soon 😉
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I’ll be waiting for them 🙂
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Just realized that I did post some of them already, products of my deeper emotions. Check out “Demigods,” “Vicious” and “Veritas” from the POETRY NOOK (the last two are in the same post).
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Okay,right away.
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Great try in writing even when your ill..
One thing is greatly focus and that is, never think of doing anything, if you really want to do as think will one day take your all time and it will be passed forever. in life whatever comes in way, grab it to that very extent, may be tomorrow will never be what you thinking off…
Take care.
God bless…
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Thank you very much and I appreciate you for taking and understanding it deeply.And yes,grab the opportunities whenever you can. 🙂
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Loved it. It indeed is a medicine for a broken hearted. Only if it were true. And maybe in some parallel universe it is, your poetry gives hope and maybe that’s why I’m so much in love with it
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Well,it has to be true somewhere.I am glad that you liked it.
Thank you. 🙂
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Mr. Writer,
This is great ! You write so well. I read all of your Haikus. You are a wonderful writer.
Keep Writing. Keep Sharing !
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I am lucky you think that way,actually very glad.Thank you for reading them all,they badly needed a reader again who would see the best in them.
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Mr Writer,
You are as good as you can be. Try shaking off your negativity. Believe me, you’ll see your name on the pretty wall some day! 🙂
Life is not another battle, relax and enjoy it.
Keep writing your sorrows but do not forget to pen down your happy moments.
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I needed to hear this today by someone.I’ll try replacing the negativity and also stop over-thinking things.Thanks for the lovely advice you gave me,lifted my mood and perception.
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Thankyou so much! 🙂
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